I just have one question ...


Do Alec and Seregnil fuck in this book?

Because if the answer is not, "Yes, and it's on-screen and equivalent to the best smutfics you've ever read," then I'm not reading any further. I'm almost 50 pages in and the characters aren't grabbing me, the info-dumping makes me put down the book EVERY TIME even if I'm stuck and have nothing else to read, and the first chapter has some of the worst verb/adverb combos ever. How the hell does someone "hiss weakly"? I've been trying to do that for a few days now and all I'm coming up with is some some sort of gasp/sputter combination. And the hissing weakly character was dressing down another character at the time! It's IMPOSSIBLE!

(Also, I think [livejournal.com profile] imayb1's jaw must be hitting the floor since I'm disliking this yet loved the hell out of Kushiel's Dart. Oh well, we'll always have Gravi ... and The Mirror of Love.)
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