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I just have one question ...
Do Alec and Seregnil fuck in this book?
Because if the answer is not, "Yes, and it's on-screen and equivalent to the best smutfics you've ever read," then I'm not reading any further. I'm almost 50 pages in and the characters aren't grabbing me, the info-dumping makes me put down the book EVERY TIME even if I'm stuck and have nothing else to read, and the first chapter has some of the worst verb/adverb combos ever. How the hell does someone "hiss weakly"? I've been trying to do that for a few days now and all I'm coming up with is some some sort of gasp/sputter combination. And the hissing weakly character was dressing down another character at the time! It's IMPOSSIBLE!
(Also, I think![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
imayb1's jaw must be hitting the floor since I'm disliking this yet loved the hell out of Kushiel's Dart. Oh well, we'll always have Gravi ... and The Mirror of Love.)
Do Alec and Seregnil fuck in this book?
Because if the answer is not, "Yes, and it's on-screen and equivalent to the best smutfics you've ever read," then I'm not reading any further. I'm almost 50 pages in and the characters aren't grabbing me, the info-dumping makes me put down the book EVERY TIME even if I'm stuck and have nothing else to read, and the first chapter has some of the worst verb/adverb combos ever. How the hell does someone "hiss weakly"? I've been trying to do that for a few days now and all I'm coming up with is some some sort of gasp/sputter combination. And the hissing weakly character was dressing down another character at the time! It's IMPOSSIBLE!
(Also, I think
imayb1's jaw must be hitting the floor since I'm disliking this yet loved the hell out of Kushiel's Dart. Oh well, we'll always have Gravi ... and The Mirror of Love.)